oh wow. I wonder what happened to the boy... this is really interesting. I loved how at first you talk about the boy and sea, then you talk about how the sea reminds you of the boy, and you can just tell something happened to him. very mysterious. very nice poem ^^

only a couple mistakes in this one, "I use to love it too." should be I used, (i think...) and "Because, id don’t know why." should that because I or I'd?

anyway... great poem once again!^^ write on!!

Powerful and passionate, I enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.