It's good to note that there are a lot of Christians that are not like this, but you definately have nailed the attitude of some.

This was well written, and I think it gets the point across quite nicely.

Beautiful and convicting, preach it bro! If we do all we can for the world, but don't do it with love, it's NOTHING. Keep writting.

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Amen...beautiful poem, beautifully written I hope this poem can be a help to open people's eyes, I believe in the message you were trying to send in this poem and I enjoyed reading it. Continue to love and continue to write for you have talent.

I recently went with a friend to a Christian church activity thing. The people who were talking said that if we don't take Jesus/God into our hearts we will go to hell for our sins and be punished for all eternity. That doesn't sound like my love to me from God, I know exactly what you mean with this poem.

It's a beautiful poem, nicely aligned and words chosen wisely. It has rhythm and flow, and I hope people take it to heart.

But... if you would include /all/ peoples, and not just Christians, it would be ultimately more helpful - because Christians aren't the only people who hate.

I agree, Christians have replaced love with hate and they seem happier with that trade than anything else; it scares me sometimes to think of what we as people are capable of doing to other up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.