i love it. the only thing is i think the rhythm would work better if you made it

"playing ourselves our on that silver screenlaughing and crying in every *single* scene . . ."

Love the underlying spiritual feel here. Nice.

*is breathless*Wow...You know, yours are the first poems I've tried on i-net and thank my aunty in texas I did.I have one question though, do you use inspiration from stuff you read? 'Cause I swear I recognised some things from this poem, or is that just me? Please tell me!SC