forever and always... n_n you captured me with that one!

this is really cool. I've always loved the concept of rain being the tears from clouds; i just love that description. I love this poem, and the imagery that comes with it!

So beautifully captured the momets before the fast approaching storm and then into the storm...love those lines..."As thunder crashes across the land Resonating in a distance, this echoing sigh"...and then in the beyond the storm, as a rainbow awaits...and then simply remambering...

I love storms and this writing takes me into it, all encompasing. Great job!

This so easily captures all of my feelings about rainy days, it's sugar on the eye.

Gorgeous visualisation with the words. I particularly like the line "Catching tears fallen from the sky". You have a way with words that really capture the imagination. Keeo writing!

Lovely last stanza. Nice peice, good imagry and excellent idea. Really? I was right? It was just a guess...Awesome. What do you reckon?

great personification of dark clouds mourning. i do prefer rainy days to sunny ones most of the time... er back to your poem, once again, very well written and expressed 0)

Very nice, beautifully done. Thank ya for your kind review.

Needa S.

Very detalied.

Very ominous...I like the verbs.

wow, this was a very poem, loved the last stanza.

Longing, nice descriptions.

A tad cliched and verging on trite (mostly at the end, with the line "Remembering eternally/Forever and always ..."). This poem still has some beautiful images and details (Holding out a single hand/ Catching tears fallen from the sky). It is a sweetly sad hymn to rain.

I love the way you liken the rain to tears. Fab poem :)

This is beautiful.. I so moved.. There's an underlying tone of such deep sadness; did something happen to inspire this? I love how the poem flows so naturally, even though the rhyme scheme isn't consistent, it just blends seamlessly with the rest of the poem. Very nice indeed! Keep writing!