I really liked it. It sounds realistic enough.

oh PLEASE update!! gr

plz friggin update!

wELL I mUst sAY THIS iS quiTE A sToRY!! updATE sOON!! I rEALlY lOoK fORWARD tO YOUr NeXT upDAtE! lOVE THE sTORy dArlING!!

I really like this chapter and it seems nicholas is a jerk, but than again servants let alone women had much say in those days. In my opinion that little detail about the medival times made me angry, but also the fact that there are still problems with sexists. Still nicholas is a jerk and needs to be wacked, but yeah. She sould ask him what he would do if he found the princess that would be interesting, but well now she is stuck in a cage well dungeon with not much athority at all. Oh my I can't wait to find out what happens.

*magically shoots inspiration through the computer* WOOSH WOOSH! UPDATE! *gestures*
x33 meaning = I love it! Hope to read more soon!

It's good!! Can't wait til your next update!

well... it sounds good. I hope u update soon. Please do.

hwy
just wanted to say i like this story so far
and i hope you keep on writing it
lol bc it doesnt look like you want to

but ya
i just wamted to say that its looking good

xoxoxox
lots of love
hopelessromantic42

oO Interesting beginning...Update soon!

-Trinity

good story ! update ! ciao . cutie-ara .

I Like this story so far!! please don't give up on it!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!

I hope you get settled in well:D I'm in high school and I have three more years so I don't know how collage is, but I hope you have the best of luck:D oh I really like this chapter hehehe I totally went off the subject but um...I really like it and I can't wait till the next update and see what happens to our princess and prince

O I'm liking this one too! I'm really just an overall follower of your writing I suppose.. I love your writing style.. and they characters you paint with words. Quite inspireing. Keep up the good work dear! And update when you get the chance!

yay it worked I can review okay I like your idea I want to find out more! Oh and I enjoy your writting it is very hard to stop reading your stories once you start and I love cliff hangers. but anyway I like your idea and hope you put up another chapter soon:D