Terribly creepy in the best sense of the words. Most songs on this site aren't all that good, honestly, or would be if there was music attatched, but this is wonderful. I can hear it.

Wow, that was great. I love the phrase "His melted fairytale". Good job.

Keep writing, Jen

I really like this. Very emotional.

"The judgement was default"truely brilliant! especially that line but all of it is too