I like this one; it's kinda like one I wrote. I like this view, with the invisible doubling over and silent screaming, along with the perfect posture and completely composed things. Very unique.

Wow. Your poems aren't very rythmathical, which is often the first thing I look for and commend in a poem, but they really express your emotions. You made me feel, see, sense the whole feeling. Someone who never experienced such a thing could identify with you because of your sheer knack of bringing the emotion to the page. Keep it up.

Disturbingly good. I love the ending. Very, very, strong. This poem had a powerful emotional effect on me, 'twas very moving. Great job.

~Emm

I loved it! I feel this way sometimes ... The way you wrote this was beautiful! Write on!

~ Lunchi