I love this. Very good.

O.M.Gosh, Your poems are so wonderful I'm running out of things to say.The best thing I can tell you is pure amazement are words you should be used to!You are just undescrible!Awesome! ~MidnightLynx~

I dont get it. is it about romance, suicide, or war? ...oh well. lol keep ritin'

this is cool.. some of the rhynmes feel a little forced. maybe its just the short lines.. apart from that its cool.

Great work. Keep it up!

~Anna~