 Melinda Becker 2005-10-20 . chapter 1i think this has to be my favorite so far that i've read. i love the hope here that's presented in such a sudden way. and i love that you kept the darkness there, the "graveyards of my memory and past," but as entitities that cant hurt you anymore.completely lovely. |
 Whisper on the Lips 2005-08-12 . chapter 1Perfect! If you go on my bio, you'll see a poem. it is the orignal one that inspired my first penname: Flamming Poet Of Insainity! I change my name a lot. Also, you gave me such a laugh when you reviewed to my poem 'shadows'. ya know your name...'light' comes in on the 'shadows' ha ha ha ...tee. Well, again nice descriptions, WRITE ON!!(= |
 Sorrowful Dreams 2005-08-12 . chapter 1very well written and powerful. reminds me of how I wrote something that was titled off of my penname. great work!
~Sorrow~ |
 Dasuberkinder 2005-08-07 . chapter 1i |
 WiltingBlackRose 2005-08-06 . chapter 1Wow, that is so beautiful and inspiring. Good job. |
 method acting 2005-08-06 . chapter 1Very nice. Great descriptions. Lovely. |
 Tatsu, the Blade Star 2005-08-05 . chapter 1Heh, this is very, very similar to a poem I wrote called "Saving Light" I just found the similarity interesting. I liked Mine when I wrote it, and I like yours now. Nicely done. |
 esti 2005-08-05 . chapter 1 Loved the line : "through the graveyards of my memory" - thought it was a brilliant image. Love Esti |
 Sacred-Phoenix-Nephthys 2005-08-05 . chapter 1Awesomeness...well done, this was a great short poem about ur name...u did good^_^ |
 mahogany lampshade 2005-08-05 . chapter 1I like the theme of this poem... To me it talks about "Hope". Good poem! ^_^ |