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greenGalilee 2006-10-21 ch 1,	abuseWow. Still trying to figure out who exactly I think it is. Very cool poem. "Be at a flutter with my flattery"? "Comformist sublime"? Brilliant.
NinjaStoryteller 2006-06-25 ch 1,	abuseMan, you have captured the clown face like nobody could. I think almost anyone could understand this because we all have a clown face somewhere inside (or outside.) Constantly changing rhyme scheme, that's interesting too. Anyways, deep meanings put in a fun sort of way... I really enjoyed this.
Mitsukai Watanabe 2006-01-02 ch 1,	abuseI see what you mean by it being so similar to my poem "Beware the Gremlin". Your thoughts of it being steriotypical insult me somewhat. The words come from the inside. It's ones opinion what words should be written. The poetry seems a little dry like you don't feel your words inside of you. Overall, it sounds great
AllyCred 2005-11-15 ch 1,	abusei like it, its very different form other stuff i've read, well done. Lots of love~AC~
Princess White turtle 2005-09-23 ch 1,	abuseMan... the title itself is already very attracting... it reminds me of somebody when i read it. I reeally like it...
Hangman 2005-09-21 ch 1,	abuseIncredible. I haven't read something of this calibre for a long time. Everything just made sense and was so skillfully worded. I kid you not, I'm not one for handing out praise but you earned it... Youre like some kind of ... SUPER... genious poet! -Cam
Moppish 2005-09-20 ch 1,	abuseOh wow I loved this so much and I really don't know why. It was just so incredibly cool and made sense with like almost no organization and it was just cool. My absolute favorite part was: "This garden is made of paperNothing is real," SO BEAUTIFUL! Okay. I'm done now. Awesome poem. (Btw, thanks for your review)
wishing/dreaming/waiting 2005-09-15 ch 1,	abuse...whoa. ..ok, so.. okay.. were you saying that you wear a mask and you don't really know yourself? or that maybe it's someone else's mask that you're mocking? or i could be completely off because i'm terrible at analyzing poems, but i will say that i really enjoyed it! it was creative, interesting and different because of the whole "Clown Face" theme. nice work!
Out-Of-Reality 2005-09-15 ch 1,	abuseExtremely unique and perfect for my mood. Again the end was trong and brilliant. I also got a strong sense of imagery from this one. My favorite stanza would be the last one, it just summed it all up perfectly. I don't know if metaphor is the right word right but I'm going to use it anyway because I think you'll know what i mean. the clown as a metaphor was cool and defenitely not something a lot fo people has done. Good luck with other writing projects!
Shadowe Goddess 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abusewow... this is a very well written poem... and its... just wow...
Maisha Mafuriko 2005-09-04 ch 1,	abuseHauntingly beautiful... gives to me to consider the clown face not all made appearing to be so and yet clown face, the behaviour existing... so detached and in need of love...
boy that you loved 2005-08-26 ch 1,	abuseno offense meant to you, and i apologise if i cause you any, but this reminds me of gacy, anyway i enjoyed this very much. good poem. 'aptmyn, aptmyd, aptmyae, batditwwshfh'
Krystal Garcia 2005-08-17 ch 4,	abuseI love the first poem. I loved the second one better. The third was great. The fourth was excellent. These poems are so addicting and so creative. Thanks for such great work! Thanks for the review as well.
sunstormed 2005-08-09 ch 4,	abusei liked this series a lot; the last two chapters are definitely my favorites, but overall very well written and an interesting topic. great job with this!
FrozenKiwi 2005-08-06 ch 4,	abuseYou are excellent at these continued poems. AWESOME work. Cheers, and thanks muchly for the review!

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