beautiful imagery... I can relate... nice job

OMFG Bal actually praising you like that? Woah.

Anyway have to agree with him though. GREAT JOB! God i love the imagery!

~If you're gonna die, die with your boots on~

This is perfect. It describes just how I feel sometimes when there's a cool breeze on a hot day and I just want to scream with the delight of it all.

Also, I'd like you to know that I absolutely squealed when I read your review of "Dull Grey Sky". (actually, almost the opposite kind of day from this poem...hm!) Thanks so much! I feel very appreciated! ^_^

Lovely. Very well done. Made me think of the perfect summer evening.

Now THIS one, is good. It flows wonderfully and you can almost FEEL it. Again, great job here. (sigh) And I wonder why I keep coming back...

i dont think the sun is out in the evenings. nice imagery thou