That was a cute way to start the story off, with the alarm clock. However, it seemed like you didn't really want to write the story with the way T.J. told it. It might have just me getting that vibe but besides that, I really enjoyed this first chapter :)

I liked the story, it was fun to read :)

awesomeness! perfect ending~ :D

FANTASTIC STORY!

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ha! i love this! id flip him off too!

something is wrong with your story every other chapter and the rest of the story from this point on t=is like messed up and comes up as error the story is very good and i want to continue to read it but something is wrong with fictionpress when it comaes down to your chapters

this is an aweseome story so far :)

I just read the entire story all at once...Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!

Hey i think the story is pretty sweet so far...I'm working on getting registered to the site so keep on eye out, we have the same writing style and same interests so you might like my stories. Anyways, sick story...But why must Shaun by a dick? Lol...Love it...MulishaChick

Yes. Definatly, I lurved it!

WOW! I cant think of anything else to say...just WOW!

LOVED IT! NICE JOB


Chrys

Ahh... The story has finished. Your story was great! I really loved it.

love, CosmoBabe335, xoxox

you should totally do a sequel of their wedding on the whole deal its something i would totally read!! loved your story!!

aw! that's sweet. this was a great story, cya later ~ Alenor.