wow... i love this! do me a favor, and come up with the next chapter quick! its so similar to one of my stories, its scary. except yours is written in excellent form. i LOVE it! if ya could, id appreciate it if you read either one of my 'supernatural' stories- the fire saga or annick. id love to hear from you. great job!

Yes! an update! I feel bad for her, Ravyn i mean.

What a way for Jesh to find out about Ravyn.

That was intense. Lovely.

well, as they say, you always hurt the ones you love...

nice chappie... kinda sad too... but i liked it... :)

hey, sorry i didnt read this earlier... nice going though! woo! that brad better watch out!

but youve done this chapter brilliantly i must say! ciao!

nice work. keep writing.

good chapter.. I bet something's gonna happen up at Central Park huh? lol

heh heh... so cute..

lovin it girl... keep it up!

cool chapter, can't wait to read the next one

YET ANOTHER SUCCESSFUL CHAPTER by my one and only sister! lol. Gawd it just keeps getting better and better huh? Well good luck with the rest of the story. Its getting really good!

another brilliant chapter!

poor Ravyn... shes all left out...

Nice chapter. Great conflict.

great chapter, will someone die? i want to know. keep writing

wow... shockin bit of news!i love these two girls... they're so REAL!

ok, gotta run! busy busy!