This is prety good. I really like it.

The title and the piece really provide a wonderful picture than can be translated into many ways. (I like stars! They're shiny XD)

seriously beautiful-loving the abstract you (lol)

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The poem is alright, but I really think you should branch out. None of your poetry that I've read have really had any formatting or rhyming, and while some people find it restrictive, that can really help stretch your mind. As it is, what you write often seems to be just a jumble of sentance fragments and adjective s tossed into the page. There isn't anything wrong with them, but some diversity can help one's writing skills, I think. ;

OMG THIS IS BEAUTIFUL! but gusse what? i just reviesed to that god poem too, and without realizing it we booth made a referance to holes! oh i love the song on the last page of that book! preety weird quinkie dink huh? (; Well, WRITE ON! (

This poem has me confused xp. It sounds more like you just put emotions into words than trying to get an actual point across.

inspiring lines popped into my mind for a new poem after reading this... thanks.

Great. Very deep. Loved it. Keep up the good work!

Chobi