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Dagmar-Macbeth 2005-08-08 . chapter 1
AhI like it but..."Still, he though, eyes looking down on a picture he held."

The though instead of thought... !

Hehe.

Anyway, it fits exactly with the poem I wrote, which amuses me.

This could even work as a prologue, if the story goes back to the time before they went their separate ways.
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