hah, all I can say is too true! If you've ever just sat and people-watched I believe many of us would come to find our thoughts similar to this poem. It's short but gets your message across quite clearly. Very nice!

Hey another GREAT poem. loved it.

o I like it! yay! I shall now continue my quest to read your wonderous works of poetry!

Great element of mystery, isolation and helplessness.

*sigh* yes yes the world can be a cold place, but then again there is always a bright side to things! But I like! You give off an excellent imagery in all your work, lurve it _.

X_x DAR

wow i like it. this world can be cold. thank you for your review of my songs. i think writing is better safer way to vent. love the poem now i am of to read more of your stuff

(lost my scribble book! _ but I'll try to sit down and remember the song and poems I had there so I can update, hehe, you update alot, )

You live in a busy city of blank faces who dont smile or try to make friends, but just walk on with their routines... thats what I got from the poem!

Totally relatable here D Superb! keep writing!

Thanks for reviewing my poem! I liked yours alot. Keep writing!

I love the mysterious air surronding this; how people don't know their identity.