So many times i've done this but its the girl who has cheated on me with another guy... guess this shit only happens to good people:( great poem

my favorite lines are the first couple and then the last couple. Excellant display of emotion. come on by sometime and take a gander of my stuff.

really cool poem, although the way the tone of the poem goes shows that maybe you really did still love him when you left. Or the character did, if ur trying to be from another persona.

WOW...another one that I relate too. Very awesome.

How angry! But the anger is well justified. This poem started of with a good rhythm to it, but about half-way down it sort of disappeared.

This is a really good piece!

Did u see the day/When I would walk away

i have used almost the exact same wording is really weird. hah, i never posted that poem either, thats not what i am , for was pretty good.

good poem! I like the ending!