Yeah, another amazing poem. YOu have a talent. Its very very good. Did you have a particular person in mind when you wrote this? Or was it just one of those things that popped to mind? Either way, amazing work.

i love that last stanza, awesome. and even if u were like that which, you weren't, u definitely aint n e more.

Another good poem. I'm really liking your work. :)

*sniff* this is another beautiful poem(thanks for the review btw!)

hm, i like the wasting you have a lot of typos and to be mean, it just stops the rhythm a bit.

I can't describe why and what exactly but I like this poem!

this is something i realized after a while. fortunately i realized this before it was too late. splendid job. k/wshadowofyou