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| MidnightLight 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abusevery wintery poem, and I can see how some people look at it as morbid, although I disagree with them: It's beautiful and pure. |
| the flaming river 2006-12-26 ch 1, | abuseI don't think this is a dark poem. I just think that it is a poem of survival. Surviving the silence and mystery of your own mind. |
| Unholy Haven 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI just adore this! Menacing and chilling, but in a very personal way. I wouldn't call it sadistic. It seems to be about acceptance, and is refreshingly free of self-pity or remorse. This is going in my favorites list! Thanks for sharing, I hope you continue to write more good stuff like this. |
| daedal 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseInteresting. Sounds like the last thoughts of someone who is freezing to death. I like it. The repetition of 'cold' works really well. Ps. If you have time it would be great if you could review some of my stuff too! |