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| method acting 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseVery lovely. I took a gaelic class, but didn't learn too much past random phrases and words. Beautiful language. Excellent job, very nice. |
| Divine Pocket Dragon 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseLove this poem, can't think anything bad of it. ^-^ "She ebbs within the enchanted gloom / Upon the chords of orient lullabies, / Astral threads of light, abloom, / Allay the swoon upon her starry eyes." I love that part of the poem it made me feel the wonder and magnificence you pull of. Lovely, simply lovely, you have a way with words. =D |