this is beautiful. i love the perspective- you are observing but don't know everything about what you see. great work.

this is such a delicate and golden little piece. the descriptions are like sequins strung all together to make such dazzerling images. really beautiful and peaceful, and gracefully written. i love :"Flying through the forests/Dancing on strains of starlight" something almost magical about it. anyway thanks for the reviews :D

Oh wow. I love the wild beauty in here. The way you capture tiny things like vivid, individual snapshots is amazing. I also like your use of the different senses in the imagery.. like "golden shape leaps", "Soft fur beneath your hand", "Warmth pressing against your leg", "Liquid eye", "Glint". The poem just mesmerises the reader with how it captures the feeling of running through wilderness. Love the line "Peace, and an ache that haunts and never wanes". BEAUTIFUL writing!:D

Heh, sounds like the sort of things I try to write and fail at. Haunting imagery.. sorta sharp, yet gentle. I can't even describe this one...

This is really pretty! I love all your descriptive lines... they seem so silvery, delicate, shimmering... Keep up the lovely work! :)