The speaker and author of the poem are very blunt about a sensitive subject. I like the approach. Great Write:)

As I too have been in this position it onely is the reality of a feeling of dispair.

Hi, Thanks for the 2 reveiws(I'm going to review two of your poems/stories) I like the way the last word to every line rhymes or sounds like it should.] The poem is different in it's approach to suicide. Very fresh! Anyway, Peace, Jessi

That's so sad. Very strong words used here. I like it!

Great job on this you captured whatsuicide is...No that dosen't sound rightum...Iam kinda of lost at words right now..so great job!

I enjoyed the defining of suicide in the beginning. However, if it was defined as a negative act, and after describing it as negative did you choose to use 'suicide is my choice'?

wow this is very similar to one of my poems, but i like it none the less