i liked this concept, bargaining with a self-induced death, nice. and i like the last line best once again, i seem to like last lines though, nothing against the rest, thats just me!

Great! Just wonderful, and yes go to that fun loving hospital I did!

-Alice Clapp

Once again, I am impressed. Your poetry is very mature and unique. I like how you have this person bargaining with death, not to save a life, but merely to gain some peace.

OH MY GOSH! AWESOME! You're a fanastic writter! You should come visit my fun loving hospital soon! YESS YES you should.

Keep writting!

-Corri