I love this! I'm a huge fan of poems with rhymes and this is one of the best! I also the the repetition of the words! I like this a lot. It flowed very nicely! Nicely done!

So what's the point of living

Living through it all

If all that ever happens

Is that you always fall

If you ask me, that's a really good question. You don't look at the world with an optimistic eye, do you?

Good on ya.