|Reviews for I Can Feel|
| FaithMemory 4/30/09 . chapter 1
I love this! I'm a huge fan of poems with rhymes and this is one of the best! I also the the repetition of the words! I like this a lot. It flowed very nicely! Nicely done!
| Black Sparrow 4/29/09 . chapter 1
So what's the point of living
Living through it all
If all that ever happens
Is that you always fall
If you ask me, that's a really good question. You don't look at the world with an optimistic eye, do you?
Good on ya.