I liked it! I love how passionate you are for God. I prayed to God that He would reveal people like you (christians who don't think of it as a religion, but as a passion for/relationship with God) to me cuz that's how I feel. oh and btw, "Man, when I get going, I really get going. Sorry about that" DON'T APOLOGISE! lol people need to here the truth from believers! :DxRachx

beautiful

but did u read pt 2 of my poem "God"?

First let me say, "Thank you," for my review, to get that out of the way. It's always nice to have encouragement and, like you, I am such a romantic sap, lol.

Now. This poem brought me to tears. I think you did a great job with the poem and it was an excellent idea to put an a/n to explain. I loved the last line, Satan already fell. Ok, before I make this review a novel, let me cap it. I loved the poem, it was excellent and you explained yourself in your a/n in a way that anyone could understand. Keep it up, that talent can be used for the glory of God.

yo, erm, i didnt lose you, i actually kept up... heh. thanks for reviewing mine. i think i should write more like that... o.O

hey, this was cool. i actually thought the "essay" part better than the poetry part, but it all had a very nice theme. and you explained VERY well, like an expert. good job.

~happy writing~

Powerful message. I love God and believe that His forgiveness is so incomprehendible. It gives you hope, I guess. I mean, we ask so much of Him, so why not try and do what He asks by avoiding sin as much as possible? Sorry, I'm blabbing. Anyway, liked the poem a lot. Keep up the good work.

I like the poem it says so much. Wonderfully done. Btw... I sent ya an invite to my site. (Heavenly Star) Check it out sometime. And by all means keep on writing for Christ. God Bless ya!

Needa S.

...interesting. My church doesn't really focus on hell...or heaven for that matter. I guess we just pretty much focus on what we can do in our lives to spread the word of God, to be servants, and what it means to live a life of someone who believes.

I agree this would be better of an essay instead of trying to cram your thoughts into poetry...in essay writing you have a lot more freedom. I don't know if that's something you would want to get into or not.

I tend to like to leave the matters of heaven and hell up to God...I need not try to figure either one of them out as long as I'm in this life of mine. I guess I've always been one of those people who accepts mysteries, leaves them in peace and learns to live side by side with them, learning what I can know. I enjoyed reading this any way. Keep writing.

Hmms... it's interesting... =)

I remember Pastor Ben (a pastor who, with his wife, Hellen, a worship leader, visited our church for a couple of months before heading to IHOP-KC, where they worship and intercede 24/7) giving us a serious sermon one day, on hell. On people whom God had brought there so they could tell others how horrible it truly was, and that it was obviously real.He said something. Hell was never meant for humans. It was made for demons.But when humanity had fallen, we were, speaking justly, condemned. By all justice, we should have gone.

And yet, at the cross, the justice of God and the mercy of God met without destroying either part.

Our God is so good.

God bless you!

Intresting perspective, and of course you explain yourself to great detail. I have to say that the explaination was more intresting then the actually poem, maybe you should just write an essay about it instead; it might get your point across better. Anyway, I don't agree with you, but I respect your beliefs. I'm glad that you have faith in something, where very few do not (including myself) but I prefer my faithlessness. I could never believe in a god who tarnishes, rapes, and murders his own creations, proclaiming that his sin is our sin in return. Its just like a father who tells his kids not to smoke but has been a lifelong smoker himself. I apriciate your work, and expressing yourself, and I enjoyed the read through, but like I said, I do not agree.

Much love,Juliet.