I;m still searching for the plot, but even if there isn't one, this is still pretty damn funny

LMFAO! I just could not stop laughing at the scene at the restaraunt. lol. I just LOVE Tomo. She is brilliant. haha. you are a really hilarious writer. love your work.

I'M ALL CAUGHT UP. HIGH FIVE!!

yeah, I was that excited. okay, so. dance. cricket. it needs to happen.

also, celeste. good lord, what. also, was she a little... sad there at the end?

I'm just going to go ahead and guess CELESTE.

also, WTF CRICKET. WTF.

rage.

or sadness.

DID SHE KNOW? She wouldn't have done that on purpose, right? if she knew, she would have just said yes or no and not invited everyone. she must have misunderstood... I hope.

oh my god, I was in stitches when tiff didn't let him drink the wine. that was fantastic. also when he got all excited to bring home money and she was just like, whatever.

also, drunk, caps lock tiff is amazing.

he and cricket are SO ADORABLE. you're going to ruin this somehow, i swear. LET LUCKY BE HAPPY!

WHOA, when was the last time I read this story? I looked at the reviews and apparently this is where I left off.

okay so, first in reply to your review, YOU DIDN'T LIKE THE WESTING GAME? omg. well, we officially can't speak anymore.

anyway, moving on, I enjoyed this chapter. duh. okay, he needs to ask cricket out. i enjoyed the "worst case scenario" vs "movie worst case scenario", because that is so true.

also, his lists. HIS LISTS. how did I stay away from this story for so long? lucky is a GENIUS character. it's so funny. also, darwin not wanting the helmet because he did his hair... hahaha.

mrs. coates drives me nuts, i hate her.

I hate you in like the best possible way ever. Every time I'm seriously getting into the chapter and it's about to swing into a direction that's finally good for Lucky, you go and you do that "0" thing in bold and I totally do an exaggerated sigh, sit back in my chair, and think about smoking a cigarette like said chapter used me for some sex. Can you see why I hate you?

The cliffhangers are too good. After a weekend of uh... "fun" times, Lucky is reminded that he needs to go in for the kill. Just when he pieces together something that resembles a half-cocked plan, BAM.

Overall, I feel this was a good chapter. It had a slow and steady pace and a general feel of disappointment over the "undate", and then that's amplified by Celeste's general crazy. One thing that rounds this out in a way I didn't except are Linx's comments to Lucky early in the chapter. I for one almost thought he had a thing going with Tiff(maybe), and it seems like a pretty big situation to get himself into this late in the game. The almost dialogue-less diner scene threw me for a little bit of a loop, but the way Linx and Lucky ditch her is classic and made up for it.

Lazy Sunday reminds us that we need another night of Tomo causing havoc and generally making Lucky look like an idiot and douche in front of lots of people. It would totally be horrible this far into the game, with Lucky potentially going in for the kill with Cricket. But that's what Lucky's life is. One big cataclysmic occurrence of Murphy's Law in action.

Looking forward to the next one. Also, it'll be nice seeing my name in the A/N|Reviewer's Response|Thanks section again. Go go!

I am so happy you updated! I love this story and reference it in everyday life haha I want everyone to read it! I hope you update soon

Gotta love celeste:P And lynx, and tomo and lucky E.t.c. Preety much everybody:P

Just like Tulsa (been there, done that), Des Moines (been there, done that), and Rochester, New York (nope).
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Where's my prize monay, biotch!?!? >:|
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That was a weird little arc with Celeste. Wondering "Why?" will be a mystery (why applied in many ways). As for the issue back at school, it seems like everything is in fast motion, rushed... I cannot see what will happen next.

man! I wish I would've found this story earlier! its fucking amazing, like an updated Catcher in the Rye only funnier and way more entertaining! I love this story! so hilarious please update soon!

I could read this story over and over and still laugh at Lucky like I've never heard his rants before. My home life is kinda sucky latey, and when I start feeling swamped, I try to find something to make me laugh. And every time, I come to your story and it makes me feel alot better. Thanks for taking the time to write and post. It really means alot, and it's been helpful for keeping me sane. Megan

Is it Celeste?
Anyhow, ouch for Lucky.
That was definitely an undate!

seven? ALL SEVEN?! what about me?! I've been reading this since the beginning!!

review-less and all but yes, reading.

good story by the way. whens the next chapter gonna make an appearance?

Hahahahah there are alot of ys:P Anyway for the life of me i couldnt remeber wat that was called, where the girl invites freinds whit you. Dunno i forgot it. Anyway im betting tiff is in lynx's!:P:D I love youre writing style, its awesome:P His dry humour is so funny:D