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| nycgurl9014 2008-09-25 ch 36, | abusei love this story its so unpredictable and its in a male's perspective which is a nice change. and no cliches! yay! i just started reading this story a couple of weeks ago and whenever i sign on its like 'yay story time! what misadventure will Lucky undergo today?' lol, anyway great story and i cant wait for the next chapter. |
| soaddictedtoyou 2008-09-25 ch 36, anon. | abusehey, i just started reading your story and i like how you play around with your characters. i can so picture them in my head right now. although i don't why, but i seem to picture wendy/jo/cricket/tomo/celeste all looking the same. yeah thanks to my lack of imagination. anyway, i dunno when i'd be expecting another chapter since i'm a new reader and all but hopefully soon enough. =D |
| MistressofMacabre 2008-09-17 ch 36, anon. | abuseAgh, I can't believe I fell behind two chapters! D:! Anyway. Hot damn! New chapters. :D I like Lucky's developing relationship with Cricket. :) It's not so...cliche-lovey-dovey-blah. Cricket's and Lucky's personalities makes it interesting. They're not your average teenagers. And hoorah for Lucky's sarcasm/pessimism~ Me like. And I'm VERY excited to see where this will go. I shall await your next installment on the edge of my seat (or the ledge). :D |
| The Glorified Kite Lover 2008-09-16 ch 10, anon. | abuseOh shit. The last part with Tomo and Lucky was hilarious! :D Good job |
| Fariy Lights 2008-09-16 ch 36, | abuseOkay, have you noticed that we have been haveing little chapter chats for the last about... 10 chapters? o.O haha. I like Cricket because she is different, but in a totally reliable way, and one that I can connect to. Does that make sense? haha. Cricket is just totally all around amazing, I'd say for reasons unknown to me. But, it is awesome that Lucky is crushing on her. That is totally great. 3 years?! has it really been that long? Wow... I just started reading a bit ago... O.O And there is know freakin' way that I would just give up a book mid way through, a good one at that. :) You're stuck with me till the end! hahaha. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not... I feel like Tomo a lot right there, just insanely random popping up at random times... hahaha. Anyway, I don't think that this was your best chapter, but still it was pretty dang funny. With Lucky's Pancake Senses Tingling and him practically getting on the loud speaker saying that Darwins girl friend was cheating on him... man, that is harse. Poor Darwin... does he even know that she WAS cheating on him? Oh... have you ever read the book Nick and Norah's Infinite Playlist? It's being made into a movie... the book is awesome by the way, I'm sure you would love it. ...Anyway, this story reminds me of Nick and Norah a lot at times. That was like a make the connection for no reason. But that book is awesome, you should check it out. :) hehe. I think this is the longest, randomest review I have ever given... you should feel very honored, lol. Can't wait till the next chapter! Love it! Peace out! |
| Zephyr-wings 2008-09-16 ch 36, anon. | abuseDon't worry, I'm definitely sticking around till it ends! This story is like my monthly fix (fictionpress-wise anyways) so I'm not going anywhere. Lucky Lucky Lucky, you should had already known that in the drama filled universe known as highschool nothing (and i mean nothing) stays quite. LOL things can only go down from here. Can't wait! |
| The Glorified Kite Lover 2008-09-16 ch 6, anon. | abuseWOW! WOW! This amazing! AMAZING! Lucky reminds me of my friend Roland! |
| Kasee Lara 2008-09-16 ch 36, | abusePlease finish. I will sick Tomo on you if you don't. And then you'll have to deal with Tomo being stolen and her being sic(ed?) on you. This story is just...wow. |
| A Quirky Tale 2008-08-30 ch 35, | abuseI love Lucky! :D |
| Jo 2008-08-28 ch 35, anon. | abuseKick-ass. I some point I couldn't help but stop and noticed that I had been silently giggling the whole way through the chapter, g'damn you. I'm pretty sure meeting someone like Lucky in RL would just be the death of me, like spleen implosion and everything, he'd be too damn funny. Billions of kudos to Darwin (even if he's in pain, the wuss) for dumping Godzila-Bitch. Cricket's moment of "ho'shit, swear secrecy!" after spillin' the beans was classic. Naturally, every girl fears that moment, but it's like we try and avoid it completely. All in all, an awesome job. Have Lucky pat your back too. Laters, Jo |
| Zephyr-wings 2008-08-27 ch 35, anon. | abuseOMG Lucky actually had a good day?! Oh I hope he didn't just spend all his good karma points. lol, I can't wait to see what happens next with him. |
| Fariy Lights 2008-08-27 ch 35, | abuseGreat chapter, yet again. I love this story! Answer to your question: "Very good so far! I loved Cricket in this chapter, and, really, I love her over all so it was fun seeing her again! And I'm happy that you put Tomo in here again. :)" I can see what you mean with Celeste. I guess when you put it that way, it does make sense... and I like her a bit more. Ooh! And I really like all of the pictures of the characters, too. :) |
| LetLifeNotPassYouBy 2008-08-27 ch 35, | abuseHaha, I guess he does. He also uses PMS as an excuse for a lot of things... and then freaks himself out. It's funny. xD PLEASE update soon. I have to go back to EDUCATING myself soon. I need something to stop me falling to the floor and dying in agony at the thought of seeing my moronic, imbecilic classmates. Amazing chapter! |
| Trishcbury 2008-06-28 ch 34, | abusei love this story. |
| MistressofMacabre 2008-06-28 ch 34, anon. | abuseWhhot~ :D And that 20 hours of sleep sounds god. I think I did that once; fell asleep in the afternoon and didn't wake up until the next morning; and then I thought I was late for school even though it was a Saturday. Hoorah for Lucky~ ...for now, I expect. :P |