WOW! I love this story! It is so hilarious! I don't really stories that are written in Guys' POV's but i luv this story! i read the other two stories about Lucky as well. I've been laughing the whole time i was reading it!

I am subtly leting you know that i am all for the Lucky/Cricket pairing... Yes Subtly (what does it mean again?)

Haha, I'll admit I was disappointed by the non new chapter, but this is too rich! Good going! Although, maybe that isn't the most appropriate thing to say to someone who got hit by a car...

The story is awesome . I'm a bit like "woahat" since I didn't read the first one, but I klindasorta get everything now xD Anywayo, hope graduation goes well (just read your page, I'm not a stalker), hope you continue writing, and hope you doen't suddenly blow up a car or anything.

Haha! That really is ironic.

That's awesome. I would love to get hit by a car, just so I could say to people, 'Oh, yeah, I got hit by a car the other day...'

I have no doubt they would freak out! D haha. How did people take it when you told them?

Wow, that is an interesting mirror happening. (I do know someone who was hit by a car and only bruised-of course, it was in a parking lot, and he hurt bad enough he left marching practice. That was an interesting conversation:

D-line: Where'd Derek go? He never came back after water break.

Director: Oh, he got hit by a car and went home.)

Also, fantastic postscript.

Livi

wow. That's irony at it's finest. It'll be interesting to get a better feel for what really happens to someone when they get hit by a car and are able to walk away from it. I have to admit that I do like the story the way it is but I'm really excited to see the changes you make. :)

Finally, an answer! Yay. I loved the last paragraph. Classic Lucky. Please update soon!

YAY! Linx finally gets the attention he deserves! Well not really, Lucky's a pretty cool main character too. But it was nice to see a bit more of Linx :)

This story always makes me feel happy. No idea why. Probably because compared to Lucky, even my life seems a lot better. Anyway, nice chapter.

Hey, great chapter, lots of laugh out loud moments. Loved the breathing apple thing. Had to stop reading and take a break, I was laughing so hard. Oh, and I loved his imaginary conversation with Jonine. Is that really how guys' minds work? Oh and the very descriptive...description of Mr. Fluffy's urine. Nice.

Oh, and sorry it's taken so long to review, my email account got messed up again.

Oh my Fuck! I just read the first chapter and I'm in love. Definately a first.

I'm glad we finally get an explanation! And in flashback style, no less . . .

Hehe, I like the ending, so very true to life. (I remember once when I was starving I ordered pollo relleno con espinaca. Twenty minutes later we asked the waiter what was taking so long and he informed us my dish had to be started from scratch and took at least a half hour.)

Livi

haha.. the proverbial elephant? no, im not a genius. just remembered that relient k song. funny story. makes me laugh ).

have a GORGEOUS day.

-Athena.

This is my favourite story ever.

I love the Lucky.

x

Another great chapter! I quite like Cricket so I hope you'll tell us a little more about her as the chapters go. Please update soon!