Aww Lucky is going to get dominated. How cute. Still digging on the story, even though I changed my name. I shall wait patiently for the Sexy of Lucky... and Co.

Hey wow... would you look at that... I didn't realize this chapter was posted. _; sorry for the late review. I bet the weird fp screw ups are related to the fact that I'm a mac user not a PC user.

I liked this chapter muchly (sorry for my excessive use of made-up words/ use of bad grammar). I was beginning to wonder when Lucky would get over that manly ego of his, but I didn't think it would be so soon.

A note on your pet peeve- I completely agree. Writing a really short/pointless review is just as bad as not writing a review at all. Seriously, what happened to constructive criticism? All I ever seem to get is "good chapter, update soon _*.

Hrm... I picture Lucky to have chestnut brown hair, reaching just above his shoulders with natural lighter brown highlights. Medium height. Then again, I just gave a really generic profile.

Well... I drew a picture of Lucky... only he doesn't have a face (I got really frustrated and gave up _;) but it at least shows what I think his hair looks like.

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Peace

I. Love. Lucky. *snatches up Lucky and runs off with him* BWAHAHHAHAHA!

No, but on a more serious (and more sane) note, your story rocks so hard.

And no, I will NOT be giving Lucky back.

Lucky: "No... please... spare me..." Me: "NEVERR! HAHAHAHA!"

Um... yeah... *sweat*

ROTFLMAO

This is a hilarious story...I cracked up when he went to the pencil sharpener and Cricket walked in...well you know what happened cos you wrote it...but I cracked up...I can picture him doing that and it's funny as HELL

Muchos

i am seriously falling in love with this story rite now. awesome discription and funny...

Happy Children... best part of the whole chapter. Seriously... great story!

I'm liking the story, Lucky is the type of character you can't help but like because he isn't perfect or even very good but he doesn't want or pretend to be either. It is weird that he just hates Cricket for no reason though, there has to be something, or a bunch of somethings that made him dislike her enough to have a freak attack in the middle of class. Soo, update soon, I love the long chapters!

Yay, I love reading your chapters so much. It seriously brightens my day. Its weird though, I have you on my author alert thing, and everytime there is a new update, and I get an e-mail, the chapter never seems to exsist... _

Anyway to answer your question thing, I would personally prefer longer chapters that get the plot moving more quickly, and fuck the "flowing" shit.

Yes, I know what you mean by characters finding their own personality traits, its quite fun and makes writing a hella lot easier.

Peace, love and everything in-between.

Girl... you are hilarious. Where do you get this stuff? Poor Lucky... hehe.

It'd be hilarious if that gorgeous girl he saved turned out to be some cousin of his, or Darwin's long lost sister that he... forgot about...

Anywho...Loved the rat-dog thing. Something should eat it. Or a sort of "whoops, was that your dog? sorry." kind of thing.

Love the story. Misa

I like this story, it's funny. And I always think up ideas for my stories as I go. Who plans? Plans, go to Hell, we don't need you! Spontaneous is the only way to do it. Also like it in the guys POV, different, more interesting, just better.

cool

Yay, I love it! I totally love Lucky! He's such a fun character! Anywho, you did a great job and I totally can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, and to answer your question, I would like longer chapters. It would give me more time to enjoy your spastic characters!

PS- Mr. Author Dude, you are a guy aren't you?

i adore darwin.

the paragraph on tiff's legal to illegal to impossible assignments is clever.

i hope you'll include more conflict in the story. you've made several homo jokes about lucky and Darwin. maybe create somethine where the whole school thinks they're gay? although that's kind of cliched, you can probably pull it off.

now that i've actually read the chapter...

i love the voice of your narration. it is convincing and forms lucky's character brilliantly. if i didn't know you were a girl, i've have thought a guy wrote it.

i adore item #12 on the list. that's my dream in life too.

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tehehehehe. omg youre back. you're so funny. love this chapter.

(had to do it for old times sake)