Great job on this...I really likedit.

I checked out the real format. The annoying fiction press rules don't manage to tarnish such an amazing breath taking wonderfully written piece of work. One of the best things i've read. I LOVE YOU!!, finally, some talent on here.

you still manage to stump me with your splendour each time I read one of your poems.

the last line is perfect. your imagery is so haunting.

Lovely - the imagery, the style, the everything. 'the height of her hair//and the bruises on her back//the measures of her worth' and 'besmirch the memory of your tricycle-childhood' I adore those!

love the phrase "besmirch the memory of your tricycle-childhood".

amazing.

This is an amazing poem, the tale that you weave between your veses is magical if not fanciful. I loved every minute of it.

Much love,Juliet.