This is beautiful in a twisted way. I love it.

But look at Life, then turn backward

Then look up and to the left

Look at what we’re missing

'nough said.

Spider -- wow! Wow. I just love this. The different images of it are amazing. At first, I got the idea of a party, the many colored lights, the acting like you're not who you really are, dancing, no rules; and how amazing that picture was. But then it changed. At the end...it was so much more than just a party. [You remember me longer than I do] That line is gorgeous. So provoking. It sort of felt like two people were dancing, but they weren't seeing each other for what was truly there, not giving each other what they both really needed. They were missing things. And maybe they weren't even dancing. Maybe it was a one-night-stand. Or maybe it was just a few friends talking with each other, reflecting on life. But I don't care that I can't figure out which image I like best because I love them all.

You definitely should not stop posting poetry. Whenever you get tired of STR, just write poetry. ;-) I really am hooked with both.

Wow! Just... wow. I... wow! Love the surreal reality of it all and... just wow. Wow says it all. Fantastically wow.