"Tell me that your wingspan overreaches your secrets, seraph,/tell me that perfection is a state of being."

I really liked those lines. Don't know why.

I loved how delicate this was. And i liked the whole idea of this perfect being...who, on one hand, you want to be as perfect as, but on the other hand, you want it to not be perfect, like you. At least, that's what I got from this.

Good job, keep writing.

oh man that's ** great