i love this one k but u left me hanging. what happened to the girl??

Wow, well there is nothing I need to say. You're a good writer and you know it. Good job with that twist to the ending by the way.

You've done it again with another awesome yet distrubing story. Such a harrowing twist of delusions and treachery. It's an intersting peek into the dark underbelly of religion. Belief and prayer are the common tools to aid those with faith. It's just as commonly warned 'the end results may vary'.

Keep up the kick ass work, almost makes me want some purity in my own life.

And to the test Purity is put. What really stands out in this chapter is the true question of 'How strong is your faith.' Many people ask themselves this all the time '...but why does God let (insert complaint here) happen'

I like how you handled the prospect of faith in the very eyes of the devil situation so far.

Oh the irony indeed. It's almost poetry as to how this is playing out. But when you really think about it. For Purity this is ilke one of those zombie movies. I mean you're basically screwed from the beginning. No matter what you do there's basically no chance for life to returned to the deluded eutopia you once held so fragile. I'm really impressed by this so far.

Hmm things seem to be slowly falling into perspective. You really went deep into Sam's distored picture of reality against Purity. It's hard not to feel sorry for the guy, but at the same time he is no better than Kody. It's the strong compare and contrast, each with plaiable faults bring them closer yet pulling them apart.

I think I subconsciously smiled as soon as I saw the name Kody. What a contrast from sloppy timid Sam. It seems everyone was a lil Purity in there life huh. Nice with the subtle touches during the traffic scene. It was like one of those dramatic slow mo scenes in movies, you know when everything is all frantic and then the atmosphere just gets thick and it slowls to a crawl transcending to tunnel vision with the object of focus commanding all the attention, that's Purity for you.

Great first introductory chapter. I got a sense of 'Purity' from both perspectives. Well from Sam and the viginal sense of purity. It's a good analogy that surprisingly works.

What really got me was the flat out descriptions of Sam. He's a genuine creepy guy and obviously flawed. At the same time his object of desire too is flawed by her blind perception of her purity.

I've once again been wheeled in by your whorish writing. On to the next chapter I go, hoping she's still pure by then...well at least by society's standards.

hehehehehe, otay. That was boring. So anyway, i'm not anti-gay. i'm anti-ignorance. I would go through another long drawn out thing, but it's been boring now, so a simple fuck you will suffice. :) fuck ya, my dear dear gay friend whom I respect with all my heart.

Oh, I see I'm getting to you. You now no longer allow annonymous reviews. And nobody is "assuming" there's no plot - it's quite obvious that there isn't! One does not have to finish a story to have an established plot, and since you didn't know that, you've only proven my theories correct... AGAIN!

And thank you for proving another point of mine that I hadn't quite gotten too: that you hate people who are different.

And yes, you DO need to justify yourself. Trying to call me jealous is a humorous but cliche way of trying to avoid the subject, but you need to justify yourself. So far as anybody can tell, you're a smug little prat who writes about abusing others because... hmm... I don't know why. It is obvious that you haven't been raped because you take the issue so lightly, but it sure sounds like you're trying to make yourself superior - why else would you be going around and annoying REAL authors with your plotless works and pointless flames?

And yes, you can't take criticism. You didn't criticise me first - you tried to justify yourself by getting angry at a work that makes people like you seem bad. Now, instead of exploding and going on an immature rampage, I merely commented that it all made sense why you couldn't stand a piece that stands up for victim's rights - because you're the type that writes pointless rape fics.

And please, your mindless insults are HYSTERICAL. You've given me the giggles - I shall be giddy all day! If you honestly believe that insulting homosexuals is "taking it quite well", then you must be really prone to even bigger explosions.

And I'm happy your comfortable and think I'm going to become famous. I don't intend to become famous, merely to continue writing stories that are for Victims Rights instead of glorifying rape and rapists.

But I can see you're merely trying to fix your ego. The rest is explained in the review you gave yourself (which is oddly detailed - somehow I think you've fabicated most of that from experience).