This is turning out to be a very interesting story. I say turning out because I'm not sure if it's done yet, as I'm still on the second chapter. I'm going to have to stop here for now though, because I've been putting off my math homework for over seven hours already, and that's not healthy for my report card.

In any case, I'm really liking the topic! Science Fiction is Teh Absolute and Most ULtimate Smex!

In response to your question, no I've actually never gotten around to picking up one of his books... No wait, yes I have. What I meant was, I've never actually sat done and read one. There are so many, and the four shelves in Barnes and Noble that were dedicated to the guy were so intimidating and filled that I was too frightened to pick one out for myself. That, and I had no money to buy one had I plucked up to courage to pick one out for myself.

No, no, I'm more of a Hitchhiker's fan. (the trilogy by Douglas Adams). He rocks my socks in a very satirical sense, and it actually shows more in my other story, The Gathering, because I started the second chapter right after I finished the fourth book of the Hitchhiker's Trilogy (don't question it, take it for what it is).

Alright, I will definitely take the time over the next few days and review along the way. I enjoy making my thoughts heard. It's almost obscene how much I enjoy it, to tell you the truth...

this story's gettin cooler by the minute. the plot is really original and i like your writing style. the only thing i wanted to point out. you have two big characters starting with "T" (Theseus and Tiawanii) and two big cahracters starting with "Y." (Yosei and Yoshida.) generally it's better to have distinct names that sound very different so it's easier to distinguish personalities. i know they're different names, of course lol, but just for future reference..anyways, nice job :)

Very interesting beginning! I like your writing style a lot, and Theseus seems like a great character. Your world is also very creative. The only thing I wanted to point out was that you had a lot of sentences beginning with "Theseus." If you vary your sentence structure a little more, it will be more sophisticated. Anyway..very good job :)

beta is awesome! i want to marry him! He is so cute! cat demons rock mo socks! please don't make him a bad guy, okay?

Beta's inaccurate wanted poster is a product of two things: for plot purposes, I didn't want the people in Lem to be able to recognize Beta by his poster, or else our heroes wouldn't be able to get very far without being pursued by the police. Also, the actual witness who provided Beta's description, who appears in later chapters, is, well...certifiably insane. Hopefully this cleared some things up for you!

Wow...how did Beta's wanted poster turn out looking so different? Is it just a bit of humor?

Good story! I'm surprised there are so few reviews. Please update soon!

have i told you how much I love your story? Its awesome. It has humor, drama and other stuff (( but really, what else is there, besides humor and drama?)) i'm so glad you reviewed my story, because if you didn't i wouldn't have been able to read yours. Sorry i didn't review at the end, but the littlel review button wasn't there so I'm reviewing here, thanks for writing the story.

Heh. Earth the vacation spot. LOVE IT, man. Theseus pwns. XD

This is the best story ever! I was absolutely blown away by the plot twists and fantabulous descriptions. Not to mention the amazing coincidence that I share the name of the coolest and obviously best overall in the entire story! I am amazed at the superior writing abilities of this young woman, and I hope she goes on to do great things and gets a superfabulous editor that will be worshipped by the general public, as she deserves to be.