No~! An update has never been so horrible! I've always thought of updates as pure blissful happiness, a play button to perfect worlds if you would. But, but...no~ .

I think I would--and i shudder to type this--HATE updates if they took my man from me! UGH

Who cares if the rest of the world was waiting? I would be actually LIVING in my very own personal perfect world. ugh. I'm so distraught (is that how you spell that) over this. Everything I knew about updates was just obliterated. UGH.

ok, i give up. I'm just gunna go to an emo corner somewhere nearby and cry i think.

Ugh. I disgust myself.


~Miranda

Short, sweet story. I liked it, it would be really cool if that happened in realy life, I mean a character coming to life. It was a very nice story to read.

Really loved this but where can I find the alternative ending to it?

Aw *sniff*...

Wow...thats a vivid dream...and now i'm all confused as to who WAS the dream, and who was reality, and even more convuluted since it is posted on fp...lol...well done!

That was good. Very good. The only real problem I had with it was that you used the word 'past' and it's supposed to be 'passed'. But I'm stupid and I only know that because my english teachers kept drilling it into my head. Brainwashing, I tell 'ya. Keep writing. You're good at it.

This was incredibly gorgeous. And a nice short read that I didn't have to spend forever with!

A much better ending.

I actually *miss* reading stories of this length. It's such a good 'short story' length, and one that too many authors don't bother practicing. Unfortunate, because sometimes this length is just what you want. Plus, it was well written:)

yay, a happy ending. i needed that. this was short but sweet.~Mel

Sorry I took so long to update, I was a bit preoccupied with my own tennis tournament last week...In real life I did not survive an awful start in my quarter-final match...

Anyway, it has been a pleasure working with you. Maybe we could do it again... And I do hope to see more soon of all of your stories...

No Trent? *sniff*

Q.Q aww, Trent had to go away... Poor, lonely Arc! T_T Aww...

aw...is it finished now? or does Trent make another appearance? *please?* i've gotten so hooked on this thing already...

interesting twist. hmm. well write more soon~Mel