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| True.Randomness 2007-11-17 ch 7,  | abuseShort, sweet story. I liked it, it would be really cool if that happened in realy life, I mean a character coming to life. It was a very nice story to read. |
| Platinumfrost 2007-06-14 ch 7, | abuseReally loved this but where can I find the alternative ending to it? |
| failte200 2006-11-22 ch 7, | abuseAw *sniff*... |
| Blue Screen of Death 2006-04-22 ch 6, | abuseWow...thats a vivid dream...and now i'm all confused as to who WAS the dream, and who was reality, and even more convuluted since it is posted on fp...lol...well done! |
| Chaotic Interests 2006-01-11 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. Very good. The only real problem I had with it was that you used the word 'past' and it's supposed to be 'passed'. But I'm stupid and I only know that because my english teachers kept drilling it into my head. Brainwashing, I tell 'ya. Keep writing. You're good at it. |
| Osunale 2005-11-26 ch 7, | abuseThis was incredibly gorgeous. And a nice short read that I didn't have to spend forever with! |
| Cookie Gestapo 2005-08-30 ch 7, | abuseA much better ending. |
| princess max 2005-08-30 ch 7, | abuseI actually *miss* reading stories of this length. It's such a good 'short story' length, and one that too many authors don't bother practicing. Unfortunate, because sometimes this length is just what you want. Plus, it was well written:) |
| Endowment's Seraph 2005-08-30 ch 7, | abuseyay, a happy ending. i needed that. this was short but sweet.~Mel |
| ArchAngelic the Reborn 2005-08-30 ch 6, | abuseSorry I took so long to update, I was a bit preoccupied with my own tennis tournament last week...In real life I did not survive an awful start in my quarter-final match... Anyway, it has been a pleasure working with you. Maybe we could do it again... And I do hope to see more soon of all of your stories... |
| Prisoner-11 2005-08-25 ch 6, | abuseNo Trent? *sniff* |
| Sunny Showers 2005-08-24 ch 6, | abuseQ.Q aww, Trent had to go away... Poor, lonely Arc! T_T Aww... |
| xanthofile 2005-08-23 ch 6, | abuseaw...is it finished now? or does Trent make another appearance? *please?* i've gotten so hooked on this thing already... |
| Rose's Kiss 2005-08-23 ch 6, anon. | abuseinteresting twist. hmm. well write more soon~Mel |
| princess max 2005-08-23 ch 6, | abuseI agree with Trent, tennis is boring. It must be different when someone you know is playing, though:) |