It wasn’t completely pointless. I wasn’t left at the end wondering what the hell just happened anyway.

It was random though – but I think that was partly why it was funny. You managed to contrast the three cousins quite well too, despite the fact the story was only short.

I liked the fact that the camel treats were camel shaped as well, and Rhiannon’s thoughts about being ripped to shreds if she didn’t het ‘them’ out alive.

Great ramdomness. It breaks up a day and bumps one off track enough to really enjoy the meaning of life so that, said one can experience a different view of the world and every thing in it. hope you like my ramdom review.

Now seriously, thanks for sharing, good job writing...

lol. Yeah, that was pretty random. It was entertaining though. I love Rhiannon's name... Anyways, I liked it :) Good job-gabi

p.s. Thanks for reviewing. About the cold, dreary Ohio thing...sorry if I offended you. I used to live there, so I figured I was allowed to make fun of it. :P

Random with absolutely no point. It was well-written, and inspired a chuckle or two. Don'tya hate those stupid English assignments? I get 'em all the time, so I can relate.

I've been meaning to delve into your longer fictions, but I never have enough time to sit and read anything that long.

Keep writing - I'll get around to reading it all eventually.

yes... this was pointless...

but still very entertaining :-)

if your "pointless" stories are this funny, i can't wait to read the rest that have an actual plot, heehee

-puts down "Go Lily" Pennies- Yay Lils! This is one of my favorites o' yers, besides Reject your Realities. Particuarily like the whole feeding the camel thing.

Camels. O-o; Camels is good.I like it.^^ It was amusingly random. Yesindeed.

A very random and fun read. The author's note does make it all flow, though, since without it this would look like you were as crazy as Kitty there.

Pointless but fun. And fun is always good. I liked, it made me laugh... Keep on workin...

Cheers, Dani

:)

Without the time to start reading anything long and exciting, I picked this one to review. I'm way behind in reviewing, but I'll get there...

Anyway, this was... random. And humorous. (humorous, period.) No really, I enjoyed it. It was amusing. It might have needed some more character work, but school work... as if anyone would bother, right? (I probably would, but...)

Anyway, thanks for reviewing, and I hope you'll enjoy the story. I'll review more of your stuff when I get the darn time... So 'til then. :)