Just read the whole story. I know it's been a while, a year, in fact, but I hope you keep writing this. Good job. I really like the character development.

a little bit rushed, but whatever.
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Since it was mentioned in earlier chapters, I actually have no problem with your quick 'pace' - prefer it, in fact. :3 It's refreshing to see a fairly quick-paced story as in opposed to nearly every other slash fic out there, in which you have to drudge through 14-2o chapters before they even acknowledge the fact that they like each other (and then another couple of chapters where they do nothing about it and obsess over the fact that they're, yes, gay!).

That sounded rant-ish, didn't it? -Grin-

I also like the fact that your characters already know they're gay, and that one of the main characters (Lee) are a bit on the chunky side; not to mention that this is the first slash fic I've seen that has inter-racial relationships.

The only thing I find odd is Xander and Shen - the fact that two out of three Asian characters in the whole story are gay, and slightly too much of a coincidence they both end up together. Might be just me, but I can't find it too realistic.

Anyways, I'll be looking forward to next chapters (if there are anymore - I'm a bit confused by your ending notes).

The infamous Rasta story! I will certainly have to keep up with this one, for all the raves I've heard about it. :D

Either of the Bronte sisters? There are three. Also, I wanna see a FOBBII Asian in this story =[ Although it'd be weird for you to introduce a new character into a completed story upon my whim, huh. Nvm that then, but if you do actually read 19th century literature, get your hands on Anne Bronte's The Tenant of Wildfeld Hall, its better than Charlotte's horribly mundane Jane Eyre. (I dunno, I figured you forgot Anne because she's generally... the more easily forgotten sister out of the three. But hey, if you forgot Charlotte, don't bother, she sucks, and if you forgot Emily, well she's awesome, so. acknowledge her existence, plox).

Oh my god. How I love these two! :D

Too much cute... Not that I don't like it, but I can't help something awful will happen because I'm just that pessimistic! *sobs*

LOL. Christ! Reggie is too cute... I hope it works out for them ;D

Seeing as I'm new to fp, I couldn't review earlier, but Gosh! this story is The Bomb!
Keep it up!

Heyla! I have to say that I don't review often,as in,well I never review.Anyway I just wanted to say that I think that this story is pretty awesome and damn funny at points,I read all 23 posted chapters in one day that's how awesome it is.Keep up the good work.

Aw...so cute. These two are probably my favorite couple, and it's nice to see them again. I was surprised when I saw you updated this, but I'm happy. So is the wait going to be as long for the next update?

I'm so glad you're still writing this story. I check my alerts every week hoping to see another chapter. :)

Was this the last chapter? I almost forgot Reggie had dreds until you mentioned them this ch.LOL

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