What can I say?

You're a literary genius!

what can i say that others already have not?

i think little spiders are sweet, but not in this poem. i still loved it though, loved it a lot.

poor butterfly.

I love the imagery and the feeling of politely killing that this poem evokes. This is a beautiful piece.

an interesting way of writing this out, painfully real...good job!

Vivid and colourful imagery here. Your descriptions are truly spectacular. Somehow, the butterfly and the spider reminds me something of humans. Human qualities. I love the ending.

Trinity

weird and artfully written. I like it.

Something (everything?) about this was abstract, something ive found ina lot of your work that i enjoy. I really dont need to comment on how talented you are, as so many people have done so before me. In any case i will say this, you're work is an inspiration.

delicious. the imagery is just golden. i repeat: delicious.

"she moans to the loss of (carnation) wings" Very very beautiful. And the last "tata, darling" is just the perfect ending to such a wonderful poem. Love the images this sparks...and I love spiders.

very interesting, i like your style though, and the random speaking in here really did it for me, nicely done

i love the fact that this is so many stories all going on at once in a poem/association play. brilliant.

wow this was very good. You can see the picture in your head.

1) I love you too!2) This is brilliant. What a different view of spiders and their catches. Superbly done.3) I superbly a word?

that was alright. i liked. an ominous atmosphere, nectareous and disturbing. good job

Omg omg...I'm such a bitch...I never review you or bothered to read your work and you're this amazing! This is brilliant...wow...such a powerful effect, I adore it! Really macabre! Love, Mia