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super happy nuclear girl
2007-05-23
ch 1,
abusewhat can i say that others already have not?

i think little spiders are sweet, but not in this poem. i still loved it though, loved it a lot.

poor butterfly.
For Absent Friends
2006-08-05
ch 1,
abuseI love the imagery and the feeling of politely killing that this poem evokes. This is a beautiful piece.
E.S. Lundgren
2006-04-24
ch 1,
abusean interesting way of writing this out, painfully real...good job!
les petits bateaux
2005-12-16
ch 1,
abuseVivid and colourful imagery here. Your descriptions are truly spectacular. Somehow, the butterfly and the spider reminds me something of humans. Human qualities. I love the ending.

~~Trinity
ayadora
2005-11-16
ch 1,
abuseweird and artfully written. I like it.
XxVendettxX
2005-11-09
ch 1,
abuseSomething (everything?) about this was abstract, something ive found ina lot of your work that i enjoy. I really dont need to comment on how talented you are, as so many people have done so before me. In any case i will say this, you're work is an inspiration.
pornographic priestess.
2005-10-20
ch 1, anon.
abusedelicious. the imagery is just golden. i repeat: delicious.
hey maria
2005-10-11
ch 1,
abuse"she moans to the loss of (carnation) wings" Very very beautiful. And the last "tata, darling" is just the perfect ending to such a wonderful poem. Love the images this sparks...and I love spiders.
not sure yet
2005-10-04
ch 1,
abusevery interesting, i like your style though, and the random speaking in here really did it for me, nicely done
ancient trees
2005-09-27
ch 1,
abusei love the fact that this is so many stories all going on at once in a poem/association play. brilliant.
BangBangYourDead
2005-09-14
ch 1,
abusewow this was very good. You can see the picture in your head.
Nothing Profound
2005-09-13
ch 1,
abuse1) I love you too!2) This is brilliant. What a different view of spiders and their catches. Superbly done.3) I superbly a word?
HellHeartedlyBent
2005-09-08
ch 1,
abusethat was alright. i liked. an ominous atmosphere, nectareous and disturbing. good job
Aimee Raven
2005-09-07
ch 1,
abuseOmg omg...I'm such a bitch...I never review you or bothered to read your work and you're this amazing! This is brilliant...wow...such a powerful effect, I adore it! Really macabre! Love, Mia
Faithless Juliet
2005-09-01
ch 1,
abuseYou have an amazing sense of attention towarc detail; its the little things that matter the most. Vision that stick with you long afterward.

Juliet.
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