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| super happy nuclear girl 2007-05-23 ch 1,  | abusewhat can i say that others already have not? i think little spiders are sweet, but not in this poem. i still loved it though, loved it a lot. poor butterfly. |
| For Absent Friends 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI love the imagery and the feeling of politely killing that this poem evokes. This is a beautiful piece. |
| E.S. Lundgren 2006-04-24 ch 1, | abusean interesting way of writing this out, painfully real...good job! |
| les petits bateaux 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseVivid and colourful imagery here. Your descriptions are truly spectacular. Somehow, the butterfly and the spider reminds me something of humans. Human qualities. I love the ending. ~~Trinity |
| ayadora 2005-11-16 ch 1, | abuseweird and artfully written. I like it. |
| XxVendettxX 2005-11-09 ch 1, | abuseSomething (everything?) about this was abstract, something ive found ina lot of your work that i enjoy. I really dont need to comment on how talented you are, as so many people have done so before me. In any case i will say this, you're work is an inspiration. |
| pornographic priestess. 2005-10-20 ch 1, anon. | abusedelicious. the imagery is just golden. i repeat: delicious. |
| hey maria 2005-10-11 ch 1, | abuse"she moans to the loss of (carnation) wings" Very very beautiful. And the last "tata, darling" is just the perfect ending to such a wonderful poem. Love the images this sparks...and I love spiders. |
| not sure yet 2005-10-04 ch 1, | abusevery interesting, i like your style though, and the random speaking in here really did it for me, nicely done |
| ancient trees 2005-09-27 ch 1, | abusei love the fact that this is so many stories all going on at once in a poem/association play. brilliant. |
| BangBangYourDead 2005-09-14 ch 1, | abusewow this was very good. You can see the picture in your head. |
| Nothing Profound 2005-09-13 ch 1, | abuse1) I love you too!2) This is brilliant. What a different view of spiders and their catches. Superbly done.3) I superbly a word? |
| HellHeartedlyBent 2005-09-08 ch 1, | abusethat was alright. i liked. an ominous atmosphere, nectareous and disturbing. good job |
| Aimee Raven 2005-09-07 ch 1, | abuseOmg omg...I'm such a bitch...I never review you or bothered to read your work and you're this amazing! This is brilliant...wow...such a powerful effect, I adore it! Really macabre! Love, Mia |
| Faithless Juliet 2005-09-01 ch 1, | abuseYou have an amazing sense of attention towarc detail; its the little things that matter the most. Vision that stick with you long afterward. Juliet. |