To start off, my favorite line is: "For truth is but a position of the mind where nothing is known,
Nothing but the mere fact that no one truly knows anything at all" and another favorite is: "Two opposing sides bound together for an eternity of endlessness".

It is true in all its entirety. A critque, however, for your imagery you used blood a little too much and too close together. A misspelling: "inhumanly to accept" is the improper context, it should be "inhuman to accept". Another: "yet the question if not if" should be "yet the question is not if".

-laughs- cute, but demolate isn't even a word. "rap" should be "rape" - granted I know this was done off a towel, but you could have proof-read before posting. The last stanza, "complete" should be "completely" and "be" should be "been".

Now that i'm done berating you with my error correction algorithm -giggles- (i'm a perfectionist), I can tell you how full of life this piece is. You've certainly got a good handle on reality, however I think you need to work on your articulation. It seemed to me that you were just rambling (that may be what you wanted it to seem like, I dont' know). If you were going for flow or form, it didn't work out. You repeated a lot of ideas and said the same things many times in different ways, much how one does when coming to the realization of something and trying to prove it within ones own mind. Overall it was a great iteration over your mind and how you think.

PS: If ok, i'd like to chat with you. Send me a message to confirm. If not, no worries, just keep writing...

I'm awestruck O.o Beautifully written, and quite lengthy :D I couldn't fit that much words on a paper towel even if I tried :P

This going to my favoriteskeep writing!