|Reviews for Want, Take, Have|
| MolestAPeanut 8/13/05 . chapter 3
lol. This is a good story. I love Buffy. I have every single season on DVD. Sucks that they stopped making seasons, dammit! Anyways. Your story's great . Can't wait for another update. :)
| esereht 8/13/05 . chapter 3
aaww! great story! david is so green! hahaha update soon!
| Kat1989 8/13/05 . chapter 3
Great story, please update soon.
| FairyOfDeath 8/13/05 . chapter 3
HAHAHAHAHA that is SO great, bloody brilliant!
| jennie 8/13/05 . chapter 1
Just wanted to stick my head in here and ask where you got her name from. Ever hear of Sam Spade private detective?
| alexialynne 8/13/05 . chapter 3
happened again. i wrote u a really long review and suddenly the server failed.. i dont quite remember wat i said..
well, thank u for reading my story. really appreciate it.
i read Against All Odds. at 1st, i thought it was a bit kiddish, but like u said, it was addictive. Lol. love ryan..n logan.
as for ur chapter here. its a fun read. the whole love/hate bickering thing is good. u'r good at it. david's beginning to show that he really does care for sam..somewhere inside him.. lol..bcos he agreed to help surprise her. nice touch.
i think we just cant get enough of them snapping at each other. its so amusing..lol..and so fun. the whole dream bout David is a nice touch.
*ps: i absolutely LURVE the notebook.. amazing amazing amazing love story..*
kudos on the regular update too! m, keep up the good work. All the best!
have a nice day!
| annicel 8/12/05 . chapter 3
Dude, I was so excited to get an e-mail notification of your new chapter. Ya see, I needed a laugh because (ironically enough) I just finished watching The Notebook for the hundredth time. That movie (no matter how many times I freaking watch it) never fails to make me cry like a small child. I'm such a sap for sad, romantic stuff... lol
You weren't mad about Angel's series finale? I was PISSED! I couldn't believe that they ended it like that. I waited like 10 freaking years for Angel and Buffy to get together (because they are soul mates and must be with each other forever and ever and ever no matter what anyone says) but, no. It's like they want me to have an aneurysm, I swear to GOD!
I'm sorry that I traumatized you with Everything You Want. Believe me, it wasn't just you. I thought some of my readers were going to kill me. Seriously. Look back at some of my reviews for that chapter when you get a chance. They're pretty amusing. I got a lot of "WHAT!" and "YOU BETTER BRING HIM BACK!" The last one really made me chuckle, because it was like they wanted me come back in the next chapter and say something like, "HA HA! Fooled ya! He's not really dead!" lol No. That wouldn't have really worked for the mood I was going for, ya know? :o)
Oh, and the new chapter for FFY will (I swear to God, I'm working on it right now) be out sometime tomorrow. I'm having a minor case of writer's block and a major case of no spare time, otherwise I would've already had it out. Tomorrow. I swear.
Ok, now the actual review. lol This chapter was -muah- fantastic, darling. :o) Sam so wants David. And who could blame her? He's totally hot. I'd do him. It was so sweet of him (in a weird way lol) to 'help' out with her suprise party. Maybe he's not as much of an evil bastard as she thinks he is, huh...?
As for Ms. Davalos, no I haven't actually read the HP books, but I have seen and own all the movies. (Though I want to and will eventually read them when I find the time) But, I think I may know who you based her character on. Was it Professor Snape? The shit she does to Sam kind of reminds me of some of the stuff he does to Harry and the gang.
Oh, I've been recommending your story to all my friends because ya know, you rock and all. Quirkyslayer was especially impressed with your work. Go you! lol I also plan on pimping your story out in my next chapter. You should have way more reviews than you have, chica. This story is freaking awesome.
As for that annoying little word bunching thing FP likes to annoy the shit out of you with... Don't worry too much about it. The fault lies with FP and though, yes, you can go through and fix all the word bunches; it's really not that big of a deal. I'm sure people can figure out what you're trying to say. Don't sweat it...
Totally off subject, but I LOVE that linoleum line Xander says in Innocence. It's one of my all time favs. Actually, pretty much all the quotes you have on your profile are awesome. I just... love you. Bear my children. Please.
No. Seriously. lol :o)
Anyhoo, rocking chapter, as usual. Can't wait 'till the next. Until then... Be good, yield to pedestrians, and don't take candy from strangers.
Oh and don't forget... Jesus loves you.
| Ladylaha 8/12/05 . chapter 2
Hey, IM loving the story so far. Continue, please!
| alexialynne 8/11/05 . chapter 2
m..you're ..i like this chapter. amusing. i really do enjoy reading ur work. u make it fun to read. and i still mean every word i said. u'r just THAT good. Now, before I inflate your ego any further, please post up the next chapter and the one after that and the one after the one after that and the... u get it. lol. yeah, i like these love-hate stories too. i mean, they're all too predictable..but a good one is always distinguishable becos its written by a good writer! like this one! :Pbtw, whenever you are free, pls do review my story. i need good writers like you to tell me what is missing..everyone else is too generous.*tap fingers impatiently* as again,i miss Sam & David's bickering already. dont keep us waiting too long. missing something is such a pain.
| chosenchic 8/10/05 . chapter 2
Bitch! Slut! Whore! Shitface! (Lol See of Chucky). Anyways I never knew you updated. Interesting chappie. Man that David guy is horny! He seriously needs to give it a rest that horny asshole. Honestly go get laid or something. You've proably done it twenty times already. Oh and all those cuss words for the teacher by the way. I'm sorry but if I were Sam, I probably wouldn't have been as nice. Anyways thanks for the shoutout and update soon.
| maddheather 8/10/05 . chapter 2
Oh wow! This story was recommended to me and I'm glad for that! At first the voice was a little jarring - I'm not used to first person, and the paranthesis were sortof excessive, but you toned them down in Chapter One. This story, with only two chapters so far, is brilliant. The voice WORKS, and the characters, as many as there are, are developing beautiful. You craft the unresolved sexual tension between Sam and Weston beautifully. And I love how you have Sam deny her underlying attraction to him in her inner monologues. Oh, that teacher was horrid, a bit unbelievable in some instances but plausible enough because are rare lot of teachers ARE that 're writing style is unique and addictive. I'm definitely coming back for , and good to see another Buffy fan. Love both those shows to death.
| annicel 8/10/05 . chapter 2
YAY! A chapter dedicated to me! You're my most favorite person ever! lol :o) Oh, and Angel all the way, baby. He is so freaking hot. Spike is hot, too, but Angel is... m... Yummy.
And you are so totally welcome for the review. Your story deserves it. It's hilarious so far. Thank you so much for recommending my fics, I really appreciate that. I'm glad you enjoyed/are enjoying them. lol My new chapter should be out very soon. :o)
Ok, now the actual review can start... lol Sam reminds me so much of myself with her obsession with Buffy, books, and anal cleaning/organization. If she was a male, I swear to God she'd be my soul mate. lol I love her.
David... Oh, David... He is a trip. He cracks me up. I can't believe he told everyone that he got jumped by three Hell's Angels. LOL That's such a guy thing to do. What a schmuck...
That History teacher must DIE. She insulted BUFFY! That is unforgivable. What an evil BITCH! Oh, and she was really mean to Sam. lol Kudos to Sam for telling that stupid, evil wench off.
Wow. This review is massive. lol Um... I think that's it. Oh, a question. Were you pissed at how Angel ended? o_O
Great chapter, you're awesome, thanks a lot for the recommendations, and have a great night! Update soon!
| Zabella 8/10/05 . chapter 1
That was a great chapter, the last section made me laugh, the sexual humour was very well keen for more!
| babydoll1 8/9/05 . chapter 1
Oh man! I absolutely love, love, and love this story! What an amazing beginning to a story. It just oozes with wonderful future chapters :] Keep up the great work! I love David's character; he's too funny. They all seem like such a great group of friends. Awsome job so far and I cannot wait in my seat long enough for the next update!
| sweetxinsincerity 8/9/05 . chapter 1
I LOVE this story...omg it is so amazing. I really like Samantha's character, and the ending of the chap was hilarious! This must be the best story I've ever read on fictionpres...please update soon! I'm one of those people that starts a story and then never finishes, but I hope that doesn't happen with this story because it is INCREDIBLE. You are definately going on my favs.