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| temblance 2005-08-21 ch 1,  | abuseWhat a monologue. I really liked it. Is it just me, or does it seem really hard to pull off? Whoever your partner is, I wish them good luck. |
| pneumothorax 2005-08-19 ch 1, | abuseHah, I like it. Interesting piece. This line stuck out: 'I shut off my tool of mariachi singing procrastination'. Amusing enough :) |
| Bloodstain on the Carpet 2005-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseI felt like reviewing this again, so I am. After reading this closer, I can see that you might not have meant for this to be humorous-but it was to me. I did read all of it, however. And I particularly like your last paragraph. |
| poet tree 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseI would love to read this...it would be just hilarious. I like it, but you know, it's just not dramatic enough for me. (Note the sarcasm.) |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseInteresting thoughts. |