wow, bravo, i really like this rhyming scheme!

-K

The use of repetition in this really drives the point home - good work _

Genius. Pure genius.

So good, very well done.

For some reason this read really fast in my head. I do like it though. Sorry if I hurt you're feelings with my 'In the Image Of God' poem. I do have a lot of friends who are Chrisitan and was raised Christian. The poem is just a rant really.

Not meant to be taken so seriously.

wow...thats a really good poem...im not a great critique..lets just say it takes me a very long time to get into someone elses poetry...yours caught my attention...I hope you have a nice day...byes

wicked...you know it kinda sounded like a voodoo spell to me (lol)

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My, my, feeling a bit vengeful, are we? *grin* I'm glad I could help; I do like the repetition, it sounds like a chant. A frightening chant, but a good one nonetheless. Intending to curse your enemies? *smile* Well done.