|Reviews for Eating the Stars|
| justasquirrel 8/15/05 . chapter 1
wow, bravo, i really like this rhyming scheme!
| Colt 8/9/05 . chapter 1
The use of repetition in this really drives the point home - good work _
| Jems-1317 8/9/05 . chapter 1
Genius. Pure genius.
So good, very well done.
| Moonjava 8/9/05 . chapter 1
For some reason this read really fast in my head. I do like it though. Sorry if I hurt you're feelings with my 'In the Image Of God' poem. I do have a lot of friends who are Chrisitan and was raised Christian. The poem is just a rant really.
Not meant to be taken so seriously.
| Slaveforamaster 8/9/05 . chapter 1
wow...thats a really good poem...im not a great critique..lets just say it takes me a very long time to get into someone elses poetry...yours caught my attention...I hope you have a nice day...byes
| Elizabeth Ebony 8/9/05 . chapter 1
wicked...you know it kinda sounded like a voodoo spell to me (lol)
| SnoDragon 8/9/05 . chapter 1
My, my, feeling a bit vengeful, are we? *grin* I'm glad I could help; I do like the repetition, it sounds like a chant. A frightening chant, but a good one nonetheless. Intending to curse your enemies? *smile* Well done.