I love the falling style of this piece...it's a storybook of stanzas that tell a tale of love. nice!

Stars DO burn out you know *grins* I like the way you relate "you" with a star.

But honestly tho, I can't see the point of the format. Hm wait. Maybe I can. There's like, one or two words in each line, as if stressing every single word in the poem. But... gahh I dunno. Can't place my finger on it. Oh well.

beautiful.. nice repition.. I like the really short lines

I would LOVE to say that I liked this poem, but then there's the problem that the title, and the lines sort of bring up Chris Martin's voice in my head singing 'YOU ARE' from 'Clocks', and while that may be a good thing from the viewpoint of you and your band of thugs, I must remind you that I'm not a fan of Coldplay. Thankfully, Pai backs me up on Clocks not being so good. But Clocks aside, meaning that if that song had never polluted the airwaves, I might've liked this one. Good job. I think.

Very interesting... I love the layout and the seperate images in the stanzas- especially the first two. =) Nicely done. ^^

Lazy log in. Anyway is there such a word as perfectyou? Other than that, this is like WOAH. Plus its in a new style so i guess that's a plus. Nice goin MAH MAN!