Reviews for All You Once Knew is Lost

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SirScott 2008-07-12 ch 29,	abuseWow, I have noticed that it's been this story is nearly three years old. I'm glad that you are still at it. It seems that we have had a breakthrough with this chapter. I wonder how the prisoners are getting along in this story. Keep up the good work. ~SirScott
SirScott 2008-06-13 ch 28,	abuseIt's nice to see that Tara found a friend. Is this the first chapter that you told in the third person? ~SirScott
Momiji K. Sohma 2008-06-12 ch 28,	abuseNo! I hate waiting for updates. ;P I love this story so much, it's so different from everyone elses. I like how you tell different peoples storys at the same time. I want another Scientist update! D: [P.S. Sorry if theres any typos' I went to a concert and my ears still ringing and its driving me insane, so I can't type all that well.]
Victoria Starr 2008-05-01 ch 27,	abuseHey there. ;D It's been awhile, but I'm glad to see another chapter! I can't wait to hear about Mina/Sheng. Looking forward to the next chapter, Vicky*
Char 2008-04-14 ch 26, anon.	abuseI stand corrected. I love this! Please continue writing!
TruthThatHurts 2008-04-03 ch 26,	abuseJust when I thought my day was going bad...WHAM! Update! You made my day thus far with this update, and such a good one too! I was wondering what was happening to the prisoners in the crisis. Being cooped up (voluntarily, but still) in a prison? Man, Cabin Fever could easily escalate to something far much more worse than what's happening in the apartments, haha. And now their haven has been violated by vagabonds? Man, when it hits the fans for those guys, its industrial sized, huh? Can't wait for the next chapter, and for the next Prisoner Journal Entry. Glad you finally found the time to update, I was beginning to worry about my favorite story on this site. Keep up the awesome work, and I'll keep on reading and reviewing. -TTH
Toxin89 2007-11-29 ch 3,	abuseIt wasn't until you addressed it in this chapter (chapter 3) That I realized you took on a pretty tough job. It seems really hard to make Zombies err... interestingly different, good job so far but you were right it is a bit like a video game or movie. Then again what other references do you have?
Toxin89 2007-11-29 ch 1,	abuseHonestly I think you got something, but it was really... boring I guess is the best way to but it. I know it's the first chapter things usually get better... but if you have the time and feel like it you should try to make it a little bit more interesting. Try to pull the reader in.
Victoria Starr 2007-11-17 ch 25,	abuseLast updated a month ago? :( impatiently twiddles thumbs Pweez don't drop this story, I'm having fun reading it! =D
TruthThatHurts 2007-10-15 ch 25,	abuseWoo Hoo! New chapter! Happy dance Short but sweet. Nothing wrong with that. It's something to let the watering mouths of the story's fans chew on before the next chapter. Sorry about the crazy school, but just think of the idea backup thats building and the awesome chapter that's bound to flow once the dam bursts and they come rushing forward! Heheheh...I can't wait. Awesome job as always. Nice to see Cabin Fever is starting to set in which, aside from flesh eating undead, is probably the number one dangerous thing in an apocolypse! I'd love to see it escalate over time as well as some more of the undead, but I am good with things so far. Can't rush genius, as the saying goes...I think. Ah well. Can't wait for the next chapter and as always, keep up the awesome job! ~TTH
Casey Jones 2007-09-07 ch 17,	abuseI love this story. I stayed up all night reading cause of my insomnia, so thanks for keeping me content and not bored!
Silken Sad Uncertain 2007-08-14 ch 5,	abuseI continued reading this, most zombie horrors aren't actually scary. Movies such as Resident Evil and Dawn of the Dead have something missing... However, your bathroom seen sent a few shivers down my spine while at the same time arousing an enthusiastic excitement. If I may offer a word of advice: when you come through sections such as the bathroom scene, slow them down. Focus on needless specifics and sensory detail... this'll cause more fear. Additionally: Thank you so much for your review and your utter honesty. I will take everything you said into consideration and grammatical corrections will begin immediately. I apologize deeply for them... Also, my explanation for the zombie outbreak will probably come much later in the story. Again, thank you... :)
Time Diver 2007-08-11 ch 24,	abuseWow, its good to see you're still updating this story. It's one of my favs so far, plus, you've inspired me so much that I've made a zombie novel of my own.
Silken Sad Uncertain 2007-07-25 ch 1,	abuseI realize it seems quite paltry since this is about chapter one when you're all the way in Chapter 24. I've always had an open ear for zombie horrors and actions, and you're story just so happened to be one of them. I know you're already far into it but Chapter One, though interesting, was quite fast paced, and the characters where very quick to figure out what was going on. I too am writing a zombie horror, just for fun, similar to yours. I just wanted to tell you that you've got a thumbs up from me.
SirScott 2007-07-18 ch 24,	abuseNice chapter. Everyone is starting to panick. I would like to think that the government could handle things better, but your story is probably right. ~SirScott

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