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| Sapphire Staliktis 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseYou're not heartless for mocking the Bishop. You've made me very happy, and even managed to make me giggle a few times! |
| Infection 2005-08-20 ch 1, | abusevery funny and interesting, good job. |
| Kokuei 2005-08-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou should remember that name, that was my name on FF.net...this was funny, pointless humor and I liked the name you came up with for one of the aliens...I almost busted out laughing. Again this was good. |
| sunscraped. 2005-08-09 ch 1, | abuseYou're heartless for mocking the bishop. *cough cough cough* No really. *cough* One mistake: you said they were from pluto but you called them martians later on.I got a bit of a laugh from this, but I think you are right to say it came out... less than optimum. Nevertheless slightly entertaining. |