 Olivine 2006-07-06 . chapter 1just... beautiful. hauntingly beautiful.
keep on writing ~~MWR-:|:- |
 angel_me_7 2006-01-13 . chapter 1 ive just got one word for it... beautiful... |
 in tesseraction 2005-08-20 . chapter 1your imagery is top-notch; i can just feel the emotion portrayed in this. the ending is so bitter, sweet, sad. i love this one. |
 sunscraped. 2005-08-09 . chapter 1You wrote this well. Good job.Keep writing(?)Does this sound cliché or what ? |
 SameOldKid13 2005-08-09 . chapter 1i love this poem. i had a friend pass away and i remember her every time it rains... this poem i feel can help me cope with some of the pain of losing someone to something like that...
added to my Favorite Stories list |
 Shadow of Oblivion013 2005-08-09 . chapter 1beautiful, just beautiful. i can relate to this well. k/w~shadow |