Its interesting, I'd like to keep reading it. Find out what happens to Ashren.

Lol, you weren't kidding when you said you liked tormenting that poor little boy! Still, I'm glad that you continued the story. Now, what will it take to get you to write the next chapter? ^_^

hey, cant leave a signed review for some reson... firewall maybe. anyway, greatness! i wish to hear more, and what you have written is truly marvelous!

There should be no "if"! Shame on your authors always leading your readers on like that! Lol.I want to know what happens to the poor little 12 year old boy. Are he and his sister twins? The neighbor lady said they had both seen only 12 years...No "if", write more! >D