Reviews for My Time is Short - FictionPress.com

KevinS. 2005-09-05 ch 1, anon.	abuseTruly an inspired effort by a young writer of immense promise. The use of vivid and imaginative imagery is the halmark of an extremely keen wit and sharp eye. If one were to seek further improvement on what is already a good piece of writing, one woyld simply seek to curb the slightly undisciplined manner in which kouno constructs his world. Furthemore the story lacks an element of character development, wherein we are given a deep insight into the mind of the sole character without a general insight into the personage of the character. In short, very well done Ken and we look forward to more.
britnish 2005-08-13 ch 1,	abuseThat was awesome. It's hard to write on this topic sometimes, since it's a story most people and all Christians know and have heard again and again and again. But your take on it was very accurate, interesting, and it flowed perfectly. Kudos.
Hannah Rose Williams 2005-08-10 ch 1,	abuseYay Scripture! Rock on. Satan got punk'd.
Hoshino Ai 2005-08-09 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis has to be one of the most wonderful, emotional, and gracious story I have ever read in my life. Reading this, I've come to realize that no one could have an idea of what Jesus went through in that desert during his fasting and his temptations. You've capture that in a way I've never seen before, and I thank you for it from the bottom of my heart. Please keep up the amazing work and I can't wait to read more. Take care, and many blessings to you.