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| OrientalEmerald 2008-09-25 ch 4, | abuseI love this story! Its well written and very different. Are you going to carry on with it? |
| Scared Loveless 2008-06-18 ch 4, | abuseA very interesting story. I would love to hear more of this delightful tale. |
| Suze-Booze 2006-12-31 ch 2, | abusestill thrilling. by the way i'm canadian too! so happy new year! |
| Suze-Booze 2006-12-31 ch 1, | abusewhat a pleasant read, i must say ^_^ and i thought i hated fantasy stories... |
| shadowc 2006-11-10 ch 4, | abuseThis is really good. You should update this sometime soon (unless you've given up on fictionpress entirely noting that you haven't updated anything since January). I look forward to reading the whole thing. |
| HannahMarie*Willow 2006-09-23 ch 4, | abuseReally interesting and quite amusing, it makes me wonder whats going to happen next. |
| toxic-noodle725 2006-07-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseim not really into the whole fantasy bit but u did pretty good. i mean im actually interested! now i have a favor to ask...WOULD U UPDATE UR FRIGGIN STORIES! note that i used plural form on stories. |
| clunystationsweet 2006-04-01 ch 4, anon. | abusehey this looks like a good one aye please undate sometime soon |
| toni 2006-02-27 ch 4, anon. | abuseI really like this story. Almost more than I like child of the silver path and I have been frustriated for almost a year because of the lack of updates on that... |
| Soul's Eclipse 2005-12-12 ch 4, | abuseUpdate soon! |
| Jareth Valentine 2005-12-08 ch 4, | abuseThis story is great. Love the characters, love the growing plot, love the setting. Great sense of intrigue as well...makes me want to keep reading. Which is annoying, seeng as there's no more. Write more. Soon. |
| Alanna Lioness 2005-11-30 ch 1, | abuseOnce again, no time for a proper review. I'm bad about that, aren't I? Just thought I'd comment on the fact that I'm part of the ficathon too! I had to completely start my story over. -.-; Don't you hate when that happens? |
| Raomina 2005-11-05 ch 4, | abuseThis is an interesting chapter. You made up some new words huh? Like using 'hands' instead of 'foot' for measurement and Tura instead of God or sth like that. So much have happened in just four chapters. Great job. Update soon. |
| CreativeDestruction1 2005-10-30 ch 4, anon. | abuseUpdate! Update! Update! Fast! :D |
| BlackFireyPhoenix86 2005-10-29 ch 4, | abuseA gremlin? I would have never guess that was the creature that was watching them in chapter 3... I for one can't wait to see Arvan secrets... Great story, and great chapter... I can't wait until the next chapter comes out... Keep up the great work... ^_^ And Happy Halloween.. |