It causes a little quiver in my heart. It is the only profound thing that I have enountered this dismal day/night.

Nice! I don't usually read poetry, but I'm quite impressed with this one. It's a different style of poetry, but it makes it unique, kind of defines it as your poem, not anyone elses. I like it.

I really liked how you captured the emotion of being an orphan. I also liked how you showed how memories tend to fade into the distance of time. Both images are really cool. I can't wait to delve into your story "Our Star".

interesting yet confusing. so who or where is the speaker now?